Monday, November 30, 2015

Developing Our Short Film

Story Developing and Script Writing

For my class's short film, I've recently been involved in helping writing the script, along with a few others who have created the story. Throughout the process so far, I've learned many techniques and skills, and overall I've gotten more dedicated to our story and not to mention I've grown closer to my classmates.

Everyday for the past month, we sit in the conference/studio room with the script projected on the TV that's mounted on the wall and discuss ideas and how the script will play out.
I should probably mention that when we first developed our film idea, the entire concept was COMPLETELY different than what it is currently.. (Long story short, our original story was too risqué and we couldn't film it due to the risk that it would lead to a very admired teacher being fired).


example of our not yet developed ideas


After several modifications and ideas straying far from the original plot, we finally have a developed storyline. One that includes interesting reversals and twists that will play with the audience's minds. Through the process, I've learned much about story developing and how to create interesting characters that the audience will either sympathize with or absolutely hate. 

Before even beginning to write the script, we wrote a short analysis on each of our key characters. We wrote their age, background, history, what their passions are, the experiences they've been through, and really as much as we can come up with about the person. This helped us get a feel of how each character would talk, react, and think as the story goes on. After writing each analysis on them, during the writing process, if we needed help with what a character would say or feel, we'd refer back to this document.

With the help of Alex Noury (this cool former student who's had experience in LA and came back to ONW to teach about story developing), we began to finally write our script on Celtx. The main writer and person responsible for our story concept is Clayton. He was in charge of actually physically typing out the script and the majority of the credit for the story goes to him.


first page of script on Celtx

Overall, the process of writing the script was very interesting and I feel like I've learned a lot from this experience. Because our story included many twists and reversals, we had to contemplate exactly how each character would think, react, and what they would want others around them to see and what the audience actually sees. I never actually thought that this much thinking and consideration goes into writing, but after this process I've learned so much and love how much thought goes into writing. I think its so interesting how much you can easily play with feelings and surprise the initial judgments of characters.

Tuesday, November 24, 2015

20 Steps Challenge



20 Steps

For this week's project, we followed a challenge on vimeo, where the rules are to take 20 clips after every 20 steps in one area. The purpose is to tell a story from your point of view using different angles and being creative with your 20 shots.

My cousin and I went to the lake one day, and I decided to bring my camera along to film for this project. I made a quick short list of shots that I knew I wanted to include, then when we got there, I spontaneously filmed the rest of the clips I wanted as we walked around. I made sure to get beautiful shots of the water and other random shots of plants and the sky to include variety in the video. I wanted to continue filming after sunset, however my camera battery died in the middle of shooting. On the bright side, I had more than enough footage to edit and use.


The editing process went fairly quick and easy. I tried to keep the shots in order as much as I could, that way it would show the point from where we started, then down to where we stopped walking, which was the dam on the other side. From this project, I learned a couple things: 1) I should fully charge my  battery before leaving the house 2) I still need to learn how to keep a steady hand with my camera and lastly, 3) favorite more precise clips in Final Cut to make it easier to find exactly the shot I'm looking for.