Developing Our Short Film

Story Developing and Script Writing

For my class's short film, I've recently been involved in helping writing the script, along with a few others who have created the story. Throughout the process so far, I've learned many techniques and skills, and overall I've gotten more dedicated to our story and not to mention I've grown closer to my classmates.

Everyday for the past month, we sit in the conference/studio room with the script projected on the TV that's mounted on the wall and discuss ideas and how the script will play out.
I should probably mention that when we first developed our film idea, the entire concept was COMPLETELY different than what it is currently.. (Long story short, our original story was too risqué and we couldn't film it due to the risk that it would lead to a very admired teacher being fired).

example of our not yet developed ideas

After several modifications and ideas straying far from the original plot, we finally have a developed storyline. One that includes interesting reversals and twists that will play with the audience's minds. Through the process, I've learned much about story developing and how to create interesting characters that the audience will either sympathize with or absolutely hate. 

Before even beginning to write the script, we wrote a short analysis on each of our key characters. We wrote their age, background, history, what their passions are, the experiences they've been through, and really as much as we can come up with about the person. This helped us get a feel of how each character would talk, react, and think as the story goes on. After writing each analysis on them, during the writing process, if we needed help with what a character would say or feel, we'd refer back to this document.

With the help of Alex Noury (this cool former student who's had experience in LA and came back to ONW to teach about story developing), we began to finally write our script on Celtx. The main writer and person responsible for our story concept is Clayton. He was in charge of actually physically typing out the script and the majority of the credit for the story goes to him.

first page of script on Celtx

Overall, the process of writing the script was very interesting and I feel like I've learned a lot from this experience. Because our story included many twists and reversals, we had to contemplate exactly how each character would think, react, and what they would want others around them to see and what the audience actually sees. I never actually thought that this much thinking and consideration goes into writing, but after this process I've learned so much and love how much thought goes into writing. I think its so interesting how much you can easily play with feelings and surprise the initial judgments of characters.